A Gift of Evil


  We were in Colaba, panic shopping for our friend's birthday tomorrow. Two boys searching for an appropriate item good enough to gift our beloved Akriti. 
  Our first thought was to buy her some piece of decent fallalery. Hritik asked the shopkeeper the price of a necklace that he liked, the shopkeeper said, "Two hundred and fifty rupees for that special piece." Astounded I blurted out, "Two hundred and fifty?! What is it made of? Pure silver? You must be kidding!" The shopkeeper gave me a puzzled look and my friend whispered in my ear that it was normal for jewelry to be that costly, even when it was fake. It was my first time out in search for a gift for a girl, and I had no idea what girls liked.
   Since it wasn't in our budget we moved on to the next shop in hopes of finding something else. Beside paying an extravagant amount for some silver beads on a thread felt absurd to me. There we found two pairs of earrings for fifty rupees and bought them. Then we walked over to the next block where a bunch of book sellers sat in their make-shift shops. It was  a quiet Saturday evening with very few people on the streets. Hritik was staying at his grandma's place in Fort
for some days and I spent the day with him as my family was out of town for the next three days.
   We walked till I saw a shop on the left, in a narrow lane, what caught my eye was a board which read SALE: ANY BOOK FOR Rs. 100. Upon entering, Hritik mentioned he had never seen this shop during his regular walks. The interior was quite impressive. Since most buildings were built long back, it had high ceilings and dark wood furnishing. The pillars holding the structure together had intricate designs carved into them. A number of antique jewelry pieces and vintage items were kept at the side of the entrance. The book sale was on the far left of the shop. Whereas on the right, old leather books adorned the glass cases on the walls. There weren't any other customers around and the shopkeeper came to greet us. He was old; it felt like years of staying alive had withered and stooped him. He walked us to the book sale table. The lights were dim and he switched on a bulb for us to see better. We liked three books: a modern self guide and two mystery novels. We were about to pay when the shopkeeper tried to show us many more books but we politely refused. Finally he pulled out a book with a dark cover and told us it was a very rare edition. As the author wasn't publicized to that extent in India, it was at a really cheap price. We gave in to his repeated persuasion and proceeded to pay for the 4 books. Shortly after, we left.
   Sighting a small fast food canteen across the street, we crossed the road and ordered some food as our growling stomachs commanded us to. I struck up a conversation with the kid at the shop, who I guessed to be the owner's son. Hritik had excused himself to take a phone call. The kid pointed out at the paper parcel in my hand and asked me what it was. I motioned towards the book store across the street and told him about the books we purchased. The boy looked at me and said in a quizzical tone, "But bhaiya, there is no book store where you're pointing. That place has been empty for years. Long ago it belonged to an old couple but they died." Hm that's strange. Maybe he doesn't know this area that well. As the food arrived, Hritik came back and told me he had to leave urgently to complete a project which was due tomorrow. We decided to take away our parcels and said goodbye.
   I walked to the railway station nearby and went straight home.
   It was around 9 pm when I sat at my study table to complete my notes and only after two hours I realised it was time to sleep. I had a long day of college tomorrow and we had a birthday celebration too. However I was supposed to stay awake to wish Akriti at midnight.
   Bored, I picked up the books on the table, slumped against my bed and started to flip through the pages of the novels we bought earlier today, my interest piqued when I finally took a good look at the other novel; it had a blood red and blackish cover with the title GIRL NEXT TO YOU in pretty italic vintage font. The pages had turned yellow and extremely dry. I observed that the name of the author was not revealed anywhere in the book.
   The contents section mentioned many stories of abrupt deaths. The very first chapter was about a school boy who attempted suicide due to depression but the ending was apparently not clear. Most of the other chapters almost had the same stories: some person dying -  either in a car accident or due to an animal attack and so on.
    In the middle pages, various incantations and signs were depicted. There were handwritten pages printed in the book, it seemed to be in Greek and another unrecognizable text. After a moment I realized it might have something to do with ancient magic. It felt like this book wasn't a regular novel at all. Some pages were missing; it was peculiar as I had checked all the books before paying for them, a quick glance but it did not look like any content was missing.
   The other chapters referred to paranormal incidents where people saw visions and got diagnosed with personality disorders. Some killed themselves, some made horrible mistakes and put other lives at stake.The book was getting weirder by the minute. Every single story didn't have an end. Every single person's death was abnormal. No witnesses and no signs of murder whatsoever.
   But when I turned to the last chapter, there was only one page with the story of a man who lost his life and the specific reasons were not given. He was found reading a book before he fainted, and he never woke up. I didn't understand the point of any of these stories and sat up straight on the bed. The title didn't even make any sense as there was no girl mentioned in any of these stories.
   The strange part was that I had bought four different books. Now somehow I saw three copies of GIRL NEXT TO YOU on my lap. As I turned my gaze to the table right in front of me, every other book I saw had the same title with the same cover.
   I couldn't comprehend what was happening; it felt like I was in a trance, until I glimpsed to my left and saw the girl next to me.

Comments

  1. Nice To listen Such Short Horror Incidents

    Always Keep Posting Such Short Stories ✌️

    Was a Girl Next To you Beautiful ?!!😂

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  2. We're glad you like our content. Stay tuned for more write-ups.
    Yes, she is as beautiful as the girl you will see when you stand in front of your mirror at 3am and chant Bloody Mary thrice. :')

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  3. Nice one 💯
    I hope I see a girl next to me n not shit my pants
    Keep the good work going

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  4. The short stories written by you are extremely wonderful. All the stories are having quite new content. It doesn't start with "Bhoot bangla" or something like that, which we have already read or watched before. The stories are really fresh, the description is very nicely written and narrated. Waiting for more such stories. Keep expressing.❤

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  5. 💯It's really interesting. Keep it up. Looking forward for more and more

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      Next story will be out soon.

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  6. U had 400 bucks to buy 4 books from an "haunted place" but couldn't buy 250 bucks necklace for ur friend.....bloody miser! U deserve such horror experiences u mf ! Sad to read the girl didn't kill u but I m damn sure ur friend's gonna kill u after looking at ur "horrible" gift...I hope the "girl next to u" turns out to be ur friend and kills u for the *horror* she experienced after receiving ur gift

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    1. Dear sir/madam or madman/madwoman whoever you are. Nowhere is it mentioned that this is a real story. The budget for the gift is not revealed either. So if you wish to suggest something, please do politely unless you us to take urgent actions against your language. Disrespect won't be tolerated here.
      Another suggestion, if you think a necklace is more important compared to the knowlege of a book, then I suggest you ask someone to throw a big fat book on your head, just to see if your brain works. Have a nice day!

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    2. Dear writer/madwriter whoever u r I suggest u to re-read ur story it's clearly mentioned that *the evil friend bought two pairs of earrings for 50 bucks* and i will definitely buy a good gift for my friend rather than buying two novels bcoz novels doesn't provide any knowledge as far as I know and even if it does to u then I guess it gives u such stupid ideas to write a story about and as far as polite language is concerned *ask someone to throw a book on ur head* doesn't sound polite and if u aspire to become a writer u should rather worship books and not ask people to throw it on someone's head....HAVE A NICE DAY!!!!

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    3. Dear friend,(madman/madwoman)
      My name is bhargavi bele and you can directly contact me if you wish to impart your advice and throw stale comebacks at my face. If you read the whole thing carefully, there is no evil friend, moreover you can do as you wish and so can my characters.
      Everything contains knowledge, you just have to open your eyes to see, I feel sorry for you. Unfortunately you only have brains and 2 hands to spread Anon hate.
      Besides, I do worship books, you're the one who mentioned twice that you feel novels don't impart wisdom, as far as I know, the stories may not be the best, but they're good and we're happy with that.

      Again, you weren't polite either, I'm not here to impress you or beat around the bush while you thrash our work however you like.
      So either come off, show some guts or please find your way out. Period.

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    4. Dear writer/madwriter, I m not interested to know who u r and my comeback is as stale as ur name thanx for that and the friend who invests money in shitty novels just like this story and can't give a better gift to a friend has to be evil and another thing my eyes r wide open and unfortunately they read this bullshit and they r bleeding and u should definitely feel sorry for me now and people who worship books don't talk about throwing books on someone's head so stop bragging "Miss/Mrs.STALE NAME" and as far as my guts r concerned than I definitely don't have enough guts like u have bcoz I could never be able to post this bullshit...appreciating ur "gutsssss".HAVE A NICE DAYYYYY!!!! sorry not so sorry for another "stale" comback

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    5. Bruh chill out it's just a story read it and move on. There's absolutely no need to behave so hateful. I have to say something do so but politely. Act like a civilized person man, ☮️

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    6. Go get some life brother, if you didn't enjoy it and you dont wanna read such bullshit stories then get the fuck out of here. Dont waste your valuable time in comment box. Buy some quality books... Ohh sorry i think you are more interested in free stuff i guess.
      I personally enjoyed it mf.

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    7. This stuff is anyway not worth to spend any bucks on! And u r here as well so I guess we both r here for the free stuff u MF!

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    8. Really enjoying the comment section more than this story! This guy whoever he/she is...this guy's on fire!!!

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    9. Dear anon hater/madperson, you're not needed here like I mentioned before. Please show yourself out. Since you enjoy picking on people, at least have the guts to do it with your actual name than hiding behind this anonymous name like a coward. Nonetheless, we love and appreciate our audience and no matter what you say or do, it won't change or pull us down. And did I say how bad you are at verbally expressing your thoughts?
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      Thank you guys for being so supportive. The stale hater can't seem to find better things to do other than give their unnecessary taunts.
      Much love,
      Amygdala team.

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    10. Hey its nice to meet you..your haterd is valuable for us to..it is sign of our success..out of many great comments i was do expecting some hate comments....thanks for that hypocrite..
      Any suggestions in story would be appreciated, for that we do have page on instagram.. complaint us there..
      Any violation about language or hate comments would not be tolerated n will be reported..
      Or stay tuned to see our success

      -Admin

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    11. Listen you worthless little piece of shit. If you don't like the content then rub your ass somewhere else don't taint this blog with your hate you lodu. You are the one who needs a life brother.

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    12. Bro this is bullshit ,400 maj bohot kuch ho sakta hai be......

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    13. I'll pray to God that you IQ returns

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  7. Man it is sad that the writers put more efforts to hate on you than putting efforts on the story

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    1. Did any one ask for your opinion?

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    2. Well... Nobody asked for your opinion either

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    3. Anon don't even try that again. Enough of your crap.

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  8. Pakka iss hater ka kata h.. aur katna bhi tha jis tarah se iss k response h.. chota aadmi lagta h re jaise vo gifts milne pe efforts nhi dekh paya na 400 m kuch aur mil jata vaise hi pura story padh k vapis se dekhne layak chizein nhi dekha... in short vo uss ka shortcoming h ... dear admin ignore him.. vo pura story padhne k baad pointless chiz pe baat kar raha h .. muh lagane layak nhi h ignore him
    your secret admirer peace����

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  9. exactly! great story indeed
    peace

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  11. you guys and your excelled stories are just so awesome to read.

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  12. I like the story as u never can assume the turn life gives I hope for reading more from u . Keep writing . Every Writer has to face such stupid peoples. All the best.

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    1. Thank you so much. We're glad to receive such a positive feedback from you. Please stay tuned to read our upcoming stories.

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